Thief Code, the second main story of mine. It takes place in the future and the story moves somewhere in Russia and Spain. It's about a small gang of homeless young people, some of them are thieves, some of them are just runaways. The story contains violence, genemanipulated people, weird science, mafia, survival and *~how friendship and loooove is above it all~*. I can tell some spoilerz: The story begins when Sheima's (the main character) sister is kidnapped by the local mafia. Our little gang has some shady stuff going on with the mafia and something has gone wrong - The mafia boss, Hugo, tries to get things going his way by using radical methods.
So. The characters.
Sheima (in the front) and Fluffy (next to her on the left, curly hair) are genemanipulated childen. There is a high risk in genemanipulation; the children may have complexes with their personality, skin, hair and eyes may change colour, their vital functions may be damaged, they may suffer from bad mental health, or they may even die during the operation. Usually the risk is lower, if the child is manipulated while it's still in his/hers mother's womb, but complexes are never out of question. Sheima's and Fluffy's mother wanted to have copper haired children with brown eyes. Fluffy is first borne and few years older than Sheima. She was born with light blue hair and deep blue eyes and later the doctors noticed that she was really narccistic and almost manic depressive, mostly suffering from the manic phase. Her parents kept her, though, and tried yet another child and since they didn't learn from their mistake, they tried also genemanipulating - again. Sheima was born few years later. Her hair was like the colour electricity, so blue that it almost hurt the eyes. Her eyes were also really shock blue, but anything else than the wrong hair and eyecolour wasn't noticed. She seemed to be a normal kid, unlike her sister. Their parents didn't want to keep them, though, so they gave the sisters away to the hospital where they were manipulated. They were kept in control and like quinea-pigs, not being tested in needles or such, but observed. Later, by Fluffy's lead, the sisters escaped as they were only 6 and 4 years old. They were found from the streets by a 24-year-old man called Dobby, who took care of them for a while. When Fluffy turned 13, they escaped again and started to steal for living. Yet later they got to know some other children and ganged up to be the gang they are now. Marco "Sabaka": Marco is from Spain, but after few funny things he ended up to Russia, St. Petersburg. Sheima tried to steal from him, but Marco caught her after a short chase. The two became friends immediately. Since Marco is loyal and cute (that's what Sheima thinks, but doesn't let Marco know) as a dog, Sheima gave him this nick name, "Sabaka", which is russian and means 'dog'. Marco is a thief as well and even though he's good-willed and wants anything but harm, he usually gets easily into fights and comes back to the gang's hide place with a black eye. Marco loves roller-skating and has thaught Sheima to roller-skate too. Ivan "Pegasus" (left lower corner) is a runaway. He was a lieutenant of the russian army but he lost his sight from his left eye in a war and so the army replaced his eye with a mechanical one, that could read people's ID's (they're planted below people's skin and they include everything from your name and birthday to your personal info like jobs, family, criminal record, where you've lived etc), could locate metal objects in clothes or under the skin. In other words, Pegasus became an agent. The agent's are supposed to wear an eyepatch or something else that covers their mechanical eye, because they were supposed to be top-secret force of the army. Pegasus didn't like to be bossed around and he was identified to be an agent (the citizens hate them) by a citizen, so according to army they have nothing left to do but to kill him. Pegasus managed to escape and ended up to be a part of the gang, to be it's so-called-leader and the father figure. His real name is Ivan Olegtsevits Pyko and he's in a relationship with Fluffy. Ruri (right lower corner) is a blind japanese girl and I have no fucking clue why is she with the gang and what is she doing in Russia/Spain. What I know is that she was born blind, she's really calm and doesn't want harm to anybody. She's deeply in love with Gallon and she's pretty naive. Really lovely lady though. Mario and Hama (Left) are also genemanipulated sisters. Mario is 21 and Hama is only 4-years-old, kinda "kidnapped" by her sister from "loving" adopt parents. Hama thinks Mario is her greatest hero and that she wants to become like Mario one day. Mario is easily distracted and she gets easily angry. Hama is just annoying like every 4-year-old is, she wants to know everything and is loud and she swears like a 50-year-old drunk man! So while her mouth is bad, Mario's tongue is sharp - nobody makes her not to be the last one to say something. And no - the markings on their skin are not scars. Mario's hair is light green, Hama's is darker green - but Mario dyed their hair when they escaped from their home town in eastern Russia to St. Petersburg. The "scar-like" markings are actually like birthmarks, they're also light green. These two were genemanipulated AFTER they were born, so during the process their pupils fused with the iris (light green, everything light/neon green). Fun fact: Hama was actually a younger brother of Marios at first, but during the years she ended up to be a girl, lol! Gallon (left upper corner) is a spanish 20-year-old dude, who loves tattoos, piercings, raving and punk. He has something bonding with a minor character Cross, but I won't tell you what! Gallon loves Ruri deeply, but he also loves alcohol, sex and drugs, which are not a good combination when going to a rave club. Hugo (middle, upper) is a mafia boss who hates this gang from the bottom of his heart. Why? Ooooo, can't tell that either. He has lots of whores, but only one of them is important to the story and that is the minor character Masha. Hugo loves big ass guns and blood on his hands. Someone has caught him singing the old Batman theme song ; di-di-di-di-di-di-di-di-HUUGOOOO ! Dobby Fox (upper right corner) is a shady man who does shady job on the shady side of the black market. He's a friend of the gang, has a dog called "Puppy" that he bought to his dead girlfriend when they were teens (when the girlfriend Sara were still alive.....). Dobby smokes awfully lot and drives the car if the gang needs a ride. Roland and Rafael (right) are ALSO runaways, how surprising. The hats they are wearing are their dad's old ones. They took them with them when they jumped in to a train going from Mosow to St. Petersburg. Rolan (older boy) is really serious, he doesn't talk much and he has a r-flaw (or something, anyways he can't say the letter r properly). Rolan likes classic style and tries to be a rolemodel to his little brother. Rafael is an outgoing kid who likes to talk with others. Hama is his bestfriend even though they fight a lot. The gang uses Rafael as a bait if they're trying to steal something bigger, because he knows the trick of big, wet eyes and cute face.
UHHHH that was a lot of text there ! If someone read it all - good for you! If someone wants to ask something more - feel free to ask! I hope I'll manage to do a comic of these guys one day. And I hope that I'll get this coloured soon enough, lol!
Oh, wow, this looks really awesome! They all look super cool, but I especially like Mario/Hama's birthmarks. This sounds like a really neat world you have worked out!
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They're not really birthmarks, their skin "mutanted" when they were "genemanipulated" because something went wrong. SO THEY'RE LIKE SKIN-MUTANTS LOL. but yeah I got your point and I'm glad you like them ! <3 did you really read all of that text? :0
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Haha, yeah, I read it all. I love it when people write long descriptions about their OCs because I really like hearing about them!
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